Kim’s usually an outstanding sexfighter and not much of a boxer, so it’s odd to find her ready to swap leather with one of the best boxers on the roster, Caribe. They’ve done this twice before with mixed results that left both girls dissatisfied. Carrie has size and power on her side. Kim has cunning and guile…and a few more hidden assets.
Yeah, I wanted to comment on how good Caribe looks with the extra bulk. I like that she’s not ripped like Mimi, just bulkier than usual…she wears it well, and I’ve always been impressed by the variety of body-types you have in the BWL. Caribe looks good with a little bit of thickness, and I love how you’ve used it as a narrative beat to demonstrate her determination to beat Mimi by working out and bulking up for her fight is a great character beat! I also like that you’ve brought back Kim’s weakness…good writing is about contrasts and creating obstacles for characters. If Kim is the best sexfighter in the league, it’s compelling to give her a weakness that compromises that ability for her to overcum (Wordplay!). As always, I’m impressed by the attention to detail and the integrity of the narrative. Great work!
Kim’s desperation was a treat, albeit among for, an abrupt finish, but something she’ll hopefully learn from….ATM she’s her own worse enemy it seems. Caribe looks awesome here very imposing and she swaggers better than anyone when she’s on form. Great stuff.